Amylf1: Debbie... will you bang your gavel... to call our meeting? Rhyssa2: Hi room. Rhyssa2: The old clock has just chimed 6:00. Rhyssa2: Are we ready for the eWorld fiction Writers Group regular meeting? RMZWRITER: yeah!!! RMZWRITER: cheering, too! Amylf1: :::::::::::hi al...:::::::: AlPerryNC: Had trouble getting to AOL. Sorry. Trina Pink: Hi, Al! Sushiwritr: Welcome, Al. AlPerryNC: Hi, Trina. Long time no see.... RMZWRITER: Good Evening, Al : ) Rhyssa2: Amy it's all ours. I'll start IMing to let people know what is happening. Rhyssa2: Oh, and Hi Al, long time no see. Boy you look great. :) Amylf1: well... tonight... we're lucky to have a familiar member to talk with us... Amylf1: AlPerryNC... Amylf1: we'll be on modified protocol tonight... Amylf1: Al will share his experiences with us... AlPerryNC: Hello to so many good friends...and new members, too. Thanks for the invite. Amylf1: Please type a (?), and wait to be called w/your question... Amylf1: Al, Judy sends her apologies... Amylf1: she couldn't make it... AlPerryNC: Tell her I missed chatting w/ her. Amylf1: she wanted to be here... Amylf1: shall we begin? Amylf1: could you hold your comments please? Amylf1: Al.. how about giving us a short rundown of your background as an editor... AlPerryNC: Ok, well, have been editing, mostly non-fiction, for 40-plus years AlPerryNC: For the last 20, in my own business AlPerryNC: OK, maybe to start ... any questions what the role of an editor? Trina Pink: ? Amylf1: Trina.. go ahead AlPerryNC: Yo, Trina. Trina Pink: One of the issues I deal with most is...do I write to suit myself or write for an editor? Trina Pink: What does an editor say about that? AlPerryNC: My spin on it. First, strictly for yourself. AlPerryNC: Then, know what you want the editor to do for YOU. TidlPom: ? Amylf1: does that answer your question.. Trina..? AlPerryNC: Job of editor is not to make your work better, but to help it achieve its purpose: sell, etc. Trina Pink: Yes, thank you. AlPerryNC: Yes, TidlPom NAJURY: Hello all Amylf1: Tidl.. your next... TidlPom: I am interested in current trends in mysteries -- plot versus character driven, given the TidlPom: topic tonight TidlPom: what do you see currently AlPerryNC: Outside my expertise, but my preference goes with plot. Amylf1: Tidl? Amylf1: any more comments? TidlPom: Thanks ń Iíll listen Amylf1: Al... I have a question about the relationship between author/editor... AlPerryNC: Shoot. Amylf1: can you elaborate on that... Amylf1: what usually happens... AlPerryNC: Sure. It is a terrible relationship, and frequently fails. AlPerryNC: We writers are very sensitive about our work... as we should be. Amylf1: can you share experiences with us...positive and negative... AlPerryNC: We are suspicious of editors, who have not suffered the torments we have suffered. Cafe Mom: {{{{{{Al}}}}} AlPerryNC: Hi, Leslie!!! Trina Pink: Leslie! AlPerryNC: Yes, negative side first: I worked with a writer for about two years. Really thought... Cafe Mom: Hi you guys...sorry I'm late. Cafe Mom: {{{Trina}}} AlPerryNC: I was being a good editor, and helpful. Then one day.... AlPerryNC: He blew ... really blew ... told me where to go ...poured out every grievance... Berrins: Hi y'all ((Ditto- sorry I was late}} AlPerryNC: saved up over two years. Sheesh. I really hadn't helped him --just "fixed" his work. AlPerryNC: I learned from that. Hope he did. Nanceeeee: ? AlPerryNC: So editors and writers must establish some kind of understanding... common ground. AlPerryNC: Yes, Nanceeee? Nanceeeee: Thanks for coming tonight, Al. What are the most common complaints writers have about Nanceeeee: editors AND do editors stifle creativity as some authors believe, or enhance it? AlPerryNC: Most common gripe is that editor tries to impose own STYLE. Nanceeeee: How true is that? AGATHA K: ? AlPerryNC: I think it's fairly common, sad to say. That's why writers need tough skins and persistence. Amylf1: Nanceeeee... does that answer your question..? AlPerryNC: Editors are like other types: good ones help us become more creative. Nanceeeee: It answers part one, sadly enough...... Amylf1: anything more Al? AlPerryNC: I gave negative side. Positive side when writer sells work you have helped her or him adapt RMZWRITER: ? Amylf1: Agatha... you're next... AlPerryNC: Good editor takes the time to find out who YOU are and what you are trying to create... AGATHA K: does my manuscript have to get past an associate before an editor reads it? AlPerryNC: Yes, in the places I am familiar with. Screeners are necessary, unless you have an agent... AlPerryNC: ...or another way in. Amylf1: can you describe the process so we understand it.. AlPerryNC: First, what is purpose of the work? Sometimes, the writer has trouble explaining... AlPerryNC: Then, writer and editor should (ideally) agree on priorities for editing. Focus. Needs. Etc. Berrins: ? AlPerryNC: I'll hold off and answer Berrins. Hi! Amylf1: how about Tammy next? RMZWRITER: Are there any similarities between a mentor and a editor? AlPerryNC: Sorry. Missed her ? RMZWRITER: ? above mentor/editor Jfireagle: ? Amylf1: Al... can you answer Tammy's question? AlPerryNC: Yes, an editor can be a mentor and vice-versa, but I'm talking more about the formal process AlPerryNC: Jfireagle? Berrins: In what ways does the style of a journal effect how you suggest changes to a piece? (Hi!) Jfireagle: I've been told that 90,000 is max for a first novel - true, false, maybe? AlPerryNC: Please clarify your query, Berrins. Sorry. AlPerryNC: Money, or words, eagle? Jfireagle: Is the statement true , false or does it depend on the mss? Berrins: I'm assuming that a publication wants to affect a particular style to attract a specific audience Jfireagle: words Buchemo: ? Berrins: (I'll hang back until Jfire's done) AlPerryNC: Some pubs focus heavily on style, you're right. Most go for subject (or author credentials). Jfireagle: 90,ooowds./ Amylf1: Al.. how about finishing up JFireagle's question... since you started to answer it... then finish with Sushiwritr: brb. server will be down. Jfireagle: ? AlPerryNC: Jfireagle, that may be true now. I doubt it, though. Jfireagle: thank you Amylf1: Okay.. Roger... can you re ask your question.. Berrins: If you don't have any credentials, what counts more; style or subject? Or does that depend AlPerryNC: Depends a lot on the publisher, would be my opinion. Berrins: on the publication? Berrins: That's it! GA...... AlPerryNC: What counts more is impact. Might be style, but more likely subject. AGATHA K: ? Amylf1: Buchemo...you're next Buchemo: Is it worth the effort to send a manuscript over-the-transom, or is an agent necessary? AlPerryNC: Again, I'm just an editor. When I finish my own manuscript (yes, editors want to write)... AlPerryNC: I will throw it over the transom, peddle it to agents, hire flacks, beg, whatever. Amylf1: does that answer it for you, Buchemo? Buchemo: yes Amylf1: Agatha... Amylf1: you have a question.. AGATHA K: If a bestseller comes out with a plot similar to mine, do I burn the manuscript? AlPerryNC: LOL. No, just change the setting. Jaws 2 sells. AlPerryNC: Besides, how many plots are there, anyway? Ruth Sil: ? Amylf1: Ruth... Ruth Sil: How does an editor charge? AlPerryNC: By the pound (of flesh) .... No, seriously... Buchemo: ? Jdfogg: (LOL) Ruth Sil: :-) AlPerryNC: If your piece is accepted for editing, and it's not a vanity house, no charges AlPerryNC: You can hire free-lance editors, but you are probably better off finding an honest friend Berrins: Vanity house? Jdfogg: (where you pay them to publish your work) AlPerryNC: And that's not as easy as it sounds. We writers hate criticism. Berrins: (thanks_) Jdfogg: :-) Amylf1: Buchemo... Buchemo: What is the proper method of protecting your work from theft after you send it out? Ruth Sil: Yes, almost finished about 100,000 Mainstream yachting adventure novel. AlPerryNC: Copyright notices on the work. Send only to reputable houses or agents. AGATHA K: ? AlPerryNC: Hope to see it on a bookshelf soon, Ruth... Amylf1: Agatha... Ruth Sil: Thanks ME TOO. AlPerryNC: Also, Buchemo, keep copious dated notes about your work, including all (dated) drafts. Shebajab1: ? Amylf1: fiction writers group members... do any of you have questions for Al? AlPerryNC: BB update, anyone? Jdfogg: ? Amylf1: shebajab.. Shebajab1: how common is theft? AGATHA K: I'm a newbie. What's the advisability of putting work online? Amylf1: sorry Agatha... AlPerryNC: Hmmm. Outright manuscript theft: rare. Idea theft: common. We call it research. Shebajab1: heh Berrins: :-) Buchemo: How can you determine reputation? Is there a list or can you recommend a publication? Rhyssa2: (Al - AZ 48 KY 47 7 minutes left) Amylf1: can you all wait to be called? AlPerryNC: Thanks. My team (UNC) lost Sat. Amylf1: Agatha... you're question is next.. Buchemo: Sorry Nanceeeee: Condolences.... Berrins: (Thanks Deb- Blizzard here in NE knocked out cable) Amylf1: can we stop a moment, please...group? AlPerryNC: Best sources: Networking. Talk to writers who have had work published. Amylf1: we're trying to finish up a question and answer session w/Al... Amylf1: let's finish w/the questions... and if there's time.. then please go ahead w/your comments... AlPerryNC: Agatha? AGATHA K: Yes. The story online advisability in light of theft Berrins: ? AlPerryNC: Yes, sorry, I got sidetracked. My feeling is it's OK to put samples of your work online. AlPerryNC: Make sure the copyright notice is on the piece. Nanceeeee: ? Amylf1: okay... we're down to the last five minutes... Amylf1: Jd.. you're next... Jdfogg: Which is easier to get published. .a novel...or a short story, (trying to decide which to Jdfogg: concentrate on) ga AlPerryNC: Was Berrins next? Amylf1: nope AlPerryNC: Who? Jdfogg: <--me Berrins: Is it presumptuous to submit illustrations along with a story? AlPerryNC: Ok, Jd, I'll dodge that one by saying what sells is something that meets a perceived need. Jdfogg: (well dodged) AlPerryNC: If I'm into buying short stories, I don't care about your novel. Write what you write best. Jdfogg: thank you Amylf1: Buchemo...you're next.. AlPerryNC: Illustrations? Presumptuous unless the illustrations are part of the work. Thurber lives. AGATHA K: Thank you Amy & Al. Buchemo: I'm set for now =thanks. Rhyssa2: Last Call. We have reached the magic hour of 7:00. Amylf1: Nanceeee.. your question.. Nanceeeee: Don't forget me... AlPerryNC: I'm sticking around... Nanceeeee: Great! What about groups like this one....submitting original work for critique.. Nanceeeee: what copyright notice is needed? AlPerryNC: Groups like this are the best way for most of us to get rapid and usually honest feedback. AlPerryNC: "Copyright 1997 Nanceeee. All rights reserved" is all you need. (I'm not a lawyer!!!) Amylf1: Nanceeeee... does that answer your question? Nanceeeee: Thank you.....I just have never needed that notification before and didn't know what to put. Nanceeeee: Yes it does, Amy Strebe: Nice to see you again, Al. Thanks for coming. Amylf1: okay... that's the end of the question and answer period... Berrins: (Score- Ariz-59 Ken-56, 5:24 left) Amylf1: it's free for all...now... Jdfogg: Skizholmes said sorry she couldnít make it tonight..... Amylf1: that's too bad... Rhyssa2: Thank you Al for being here. Thank you Amy for running the show. AlPerryNC: I want to thank everyone. I hope it's been worthwhile. Amylf1: yes it has... Jdfogg: (she missed a good session) Amylf1: let's give Al a big hand.. AlPerryNC: Good to visit with old friends. I have missed you folks. Rhyssa2: I'll have to read the log. I was to busy in the hall Amylf1: ::::clap:::clap::::clap::::: RMZWRITER: <<<<<<<<<<<<clap clap>>>>>>>>>> Jdfogg: Thank you Al ><><><><><><><><><><<<><><><>< AGATHA K: Rhyssa2, thanks for the welcome earlier. Rhyssa2: :::applause::: Nanceeeee: Applause! Applause! What a rich, resonant speaking voice you have, Al! Berrins: Thanks AL, sorry I stepped on some toes, got a little confused Cafe Mom: Guess what...one hand clapping doesn't make a sound after all. Rhyssa2: Your welcome Agatha Jdfogg: <--counting piggies....all there AlPerryNC: Not at all. It was a lot quieter than my last time in the group Sushiwritr: Whew! Missed the whole dang meeting . . . Rhyssa2: What's in the other hand, Leslie? Amylf1: Cafe Mom: sheesh Sushiwritr: (Please send the log asap!) Cafe Mom: a beer, of course Strebe: Ewww, Al. Don't remind me. Amylf1: Paul... where were you? Rhyssa2: I will Paul AlPerryNC: Paul, I DIDN'T say anything. Sushiwritr: The guys up front were taking the company network off line. Cafe Mom: writer can't write without gettin' liquored up first. Berrins: Yes; thanks, Debbie, for bouncing. Good work, and a lot of it! Sushiwritr: No modem in this humble back office. AlPerryNC: That was mostly my fault, Daan.... Strebe: Writer can't liquor without getting written up first. Buchemo: It was worth while-controlled well -thatís important-thanks Amy and Al! Amylf1: Cafe Mom: LOL, daan RMZWRITER: Yes, Deb...You had your work cut out for you tonight! Sushiwritr: Leslie! Then how do I write? Strebe: Hardly, Al! I admire your courage. Cafe Mom: I am not of this universe Sushiwritr: OK, missed the second half of the meeting, then. AlPerryNC: Trailing Hale-Bopp? Amylf1: Cafe Mom: yep, Al Cafe Mom: It was beautiful tonight Jdfogg: another space case??? AGATHA K: What's LOL mean? Rhyssa2: Well, guys I'm closing the log for the last time. It'll be in your mailboxes in a little Amylf1: laughing out loud.. Jdfogg: Laugh Out Loud AlPerryNC: Laughing Out Loud. As in ROTFLOL. Rhyssa2: while. Al, do you want a copy of the log? Cafe Mom: This is my first time online. How does this work> AlPerryNC: Please.... Nanceeeee: Rhyssa2, will I get one, too? Rhyssa2: Ok. :) Strebe: Yah. And it's my first time at a computer.; Sushiwritr: Choking . . . AlPerryNC: Leslie, surely you jest.... but let a grizzled old veteran show you... Rhyssa2: Yep. Nanceeeee Shebajab1: Al-could you clarify for me? Amylf1: Leslie... are you really there... or is it someone from your family? AGATHA K: What's ROTF mean? Strebe: Al, please don't clarify. You'll be too hard to see. Cafe Mom: LOL Berrins: (NCAA update- 65 AZ, 64 Ky, 3:28 left) Nanceeeee: Thanks! AlPerryNC: Cream rises to the top. Jdfogg: <--getting the giggles... Strebe: :::::: rising :::::: Cafe Mom: No, it's me, Amy...I'm just joshin' Amylf1: heehehe AlPerryNC: Rolling On The Floor.... Rhyssa2: Night All (or is that Nytol)? Cafe Mom: Seconal AlPerryNC: Abyssinnia. Jdfogg: Valium of the Dolls Sushiwritr: Absinthe. Cafe Mom: :-D Amylf1: well... folks... I'm bushed....
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