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2/9/98 6:58:56 PM   Opening "Chat Log 2/9/98"


Sushiwritr: Tonight we'll be hosting historical fiction author Diane Haeger.
She sould be arriving soon.

DarylR4596: Wow, great timing, Paul. :D

Valatin:    A log of tonight's chat will be uplaoded to the file libraries.

Sushiwritr: Ah! Even as I speak.   :-)

Valatin:    Then the mystery folk will scoot.  Night all :>

Sushiwritr: Ben, I emailed you a proposed "greeting."

Sushiwritr: Anyone who wishes, plese do stick around!!!

FalcnEdie:  how's that?

Sushiwritr: I've been IMed!

DLHaeger:   Paul, maybe it'll just be you and me this evening. :)

FalcnEdie:  I'm ready   :-)

Sushiwritr: Our crowd tends to trickle in over the first few minutes . . .

Sushiwritr: Sarah is here!

DLHaeger:   Just a bit of levity. :)

FalcnEdie:  I'm here! I'm here!  <waving arms enthusiastically>

TatumVe:    hello hello

DLHaeger:   Evening, Edie. Or do you prefer Falcn? <g>

Sushiwritr: Shall we begin?

Sushiwritr: <--I'm Paul, he's Ben.

DLHaeger:   Great.

FalcnEdie:  Ben  :-)   thanks

FalcnEdie:  I'm undercover

TatumVe:    lol

FalcnEdie:  that's why the Groucho mask

DLHaeger:   Gotcha.

Sushiwritr: I'm  running the Log for posterity.

Sushiwritr: Well, *I* have a question or two.

FalcnEdie:  Posterity is late again, huh?

DLHaeger:   Since I'm here. :)

Sushiwritr: Perhaps I'll delegate myself to start things rolling, eh?

FalcnEdie:  cool

DLHaeger:   Go right ahead Paul.

AnacondaOz: Hi there

Sushiwritr: In "Pieces of April" you use a lot of Scottish brogue.

Sushiwritr: (Hi Judy!)

Sushiwritr: We've had tremendous arguments about "writing" accents.

DLHaeger:   Irish brogue, Scottish burr. But, yes, I did.

DLHaeger:   How so?

Sushiwritr: How to you do this and maintain readability?

FalcnEdie:  hi Judy  :-)

Sushiwritr: Where IS everyone???

FalcnEdie:  Hi Sarah  :-)

Sushiwritr: Not even many surfers tonite.

TatumVe:    Hey Ben

Sushiwritr: How to you do this and maintain readability?

DLHaeger:   I'm not sure I know what you mean. My characters don't use it
exclusively...

DLHaeger:   But in the case of Pieces of April where part is set in Scotland
and the other part in the..

Sushiwritr: Some of our members have used, we decided, an excess of jargon,
slang, etc.

DLHaeger:   U.S. I wanted readrs to be very clear on who was speaking and to
"see" how it would...

DLHaeger:   sound, if that makes sense.

Sushiwritr: Yes, and you did it well.  :-)

Sushiwritr: But accents, if written literally, can be very dense.

DLHaeger:   I agree. And so my goal was not to be terribly literal but to
give the...

DLHaeger:   reader the sense that they were hearing Scottish people speak,
not Americans.

Sushiwritr: Thanks. (Hello Matt, Donna. Questions?)

DLHaeger:   Without a bit of the burr, I don't feel the sensation of "being"
in Scotland as you read...

DLHaeger:   would have been there.

Mstrebe:    (nope.) (is this a whisper?)

Sushiwritr: Aye, me lassie.

DLHaeger:   Most mail I've gotten has indicated that people didn't feel I hit
them over the head with it

DRLIVES:    Hi, have we discussed research...sorry that I'm late, but I'd
like to know how Diane does

DRLIVES:    research

DRLIVES:    ?

DLHaeger:   Hi DR. Well, it depends whether I'm doing a historical or a
contemporary really.

Sushiwritr: Donna, ga.

DLHaeger:   But with few exceptions, the first thing that works for me, is
that I really...

DRLIVES:    How are they different in the method?

DLHaeger:   must go to the locations in which I set the story.

DLHaeger:   Well, research for an historical, especially my based-in-fact
novels (my 1st 2)...

DLHaeger:   required a huge amount of historical knowledge, costume, music...

DLHaeger:   etc. They also took me a lot longer.

DLHaeger:   For the contemporaries, I still visit the country, work on
dialogue, as we were just ...

DLHaeger:   discussing, etc... but the lengths to which I need to go are not
quite as great nor...

DLHaeger:   as time consuming.

DLHaeger:   DR, was there some particular aspect of research you were
wondering about?

DRLIVES:    do you worry about putting in too much background information,
and how do you keep it all

DRLIVES:    straight?

DLHaeger:   For the historicals, you mean?

DRLIVES:    yes, although both, could be a problem

DLHaeger:   That was always a challenge and I usually over wrote. LOL

DRLIVES:    and then the pruning shears?

DLHaeger:   Courtesan, my 1st novel was bought at 1,200 pages! Simon&Schuster

AnacondaOz: it must take ages

DLHaeger:   then asked *me* to cut up the baby I'd spent 4 years creating!

AnacondaOz: (Hi people)

Sushiwritr: <--wow, had heard first novels could never be so long!

DRLIVES:    and your enthusiasm stayed fresh?

DLHaeger:   Oz, I think I'm a bit better at it now, but in the beginning it
was really hard.

DLHaeger:   I took editors at their word to just tell the story until I was
finished. LOL

DRLIVES:    lol

DLHaeger:   Not the way I approach the task nowadays!

DLHaeger:   DR, if the story is compelling enough, and I really get into the
characters, yes, then...

DLHaeger:   the enthusiasm is there.

FalcnEdie:  have you ever had historical research create a serious kink in
your story line?

AnacondaOz: good question

FalcnEdie:  I mean, in the original concept versus the end result

DLHaeger:   Sure. Absolutely. In Courtesan the "hero" as they call it dies in
the end.

DLHaeger:   Not great for historical romance. Nor was the fact that at one

DLHaeger:   point he also fathered a child by another woman, who was not my
heroine.

DLHaeger:   Getting around 2 hurdles like that, and still making you cheer
for him and them...

Sushiwritr: Readers would scream at "fudging," I suppose.

DLHaeger:   felt like a huge challenge.

DLHaeger:   Well, you know, I just told the story in that one. I didn't know
enough to fudge, to be...

DLHaeger:   honest with you. I was just totally driven to tell the true French

DLHaeger:   story to an American audience. Fortunately for me, S&S liked it
as it was.

DLHaeger:   Plus, there are always readers who write and correct you, so
you're right about that!

FalcnEdie:  LOL

Sushiwritr: (Guys, don't make Donna ask *all*  the questions!)

DRLIVES:    I can imagine!

FalcnEdie:  gotta love those who pay attention

DLHaeger:   Or curse them!  LOL

DLHaeger:   Just kidding!

AnacondaOz: ?

Sushiwritr: Judy, GA

AnacondaOz: You said that you want the readers to cheer for the
hero/heroine....is this always on your

AnacondaOz: mind as you write?

DLHaeger:   I think, yes. But not in the way a romance writer is constrained
by it.

DLHaeger:   I want readers to love my characters. To care about them.

DLHaeger:   But because I don't write straight romance anymore, I don't need

DLHaeger:   to write only about white knights and damsels in distress.

DLHaeger:   I like people with flaws.

AnacondaOz: So, making people love the flaws is a challenge?

DLHaeger:   Not love the flaws, but feel compelled by the characters who have
them.

DLHaeger:   Want to know them.

AnacondaOz: okay

Mstrebe:    Making people love the people in spite of the flaws would be the
challenge, I think.

DLHaeger:   I didn't enjoy writing about perfect people who always end up
blissfully happy.

AnacondaOz: no, that would be a drag

AnacondaOz: :)

FalcnEdie:  how about history taking you someplace more intersting than the
original idea?

FalcnEdie:  for instance, once when I was introducing an alcoholic (1700) I
discovered it was not at all

FalcnEdie:  thought of or treated as today

FalcnEdie:  not entire story, just a scene or situation

DLHaeger:   Ms, I try not to make the flaws so awful that you would have to
love them in spite of them.

DLHaeger:   I just think flawed people are more interesting most of the time.

Typosarus:  ?

Sushiwritr: Typo, GA

Typosarus:  What is the one major difference in what you write now and your
first book?

DLHaeger:   My first book was a sweeping historical saga based on a true
story...

DLHaeger:   I am now under contract to write shorter contemporary fiction
with a bit of mystery.

DLHaeger:   So that's a pretty major difference.

Typosarus:  Thank you, yes it is very different.  GA

DRLIVES:    ?

DLHaeger:   And takes a *lot* less time!

DLHaeger:   9 months instead of 4 years, to be exact!

Sushiwritr: DR, GA

DRLIVES:    Why did you make the switch?  Is that part of what you said in
your bio on keeping up with

DRLIVES:    the times? GA

DLHaeger:   Yes, I think so. Courtesan was a very difficult sell even 5 yrs
ago...

DLHaeger:   It was long, set in France (not a favorite country editorially)...

DLHaeger:   and as I said earlier, the hero dies in the end.

Sushiwritr: ?

DLHaeger:   But more than that, contemporaries have proven much more bankable.

Sushiwritr: Sushi, GA  ;-)

DRLIVES:    lol

DLHaeger:   I mean from the publishing aspect!

Sushiwritr: The question that's always asked: do you use an Agent? Did you
get one first?

DLHaeger:   Although, actually, if it takes me less time and I sell more
books.. LOL

DLHaeger:   Yes. Absolutely...

DLHaeger:   I know the debate. People ask me all the time if I really think
they are ...

DLHaeger:   necessary. My answer after being involved in this for a while now
is...

DLHaeger:   that sometimes they are a necessary evil...

Sushiwritr: <-- seeking Agent as we speak.  :-)

DLHaeger:   You pay them a percentage right off the top, but a good agent
simply...

DLHaeger:   has contacts that most of us don't.

Gusto2writ: ?

Sushiwritr: Gusto, GA

DLHaeger:   They can also be a good line of editorial help too, if you get
one who does that.

Gusto2writ: some agents charge 10% others 15,

Gusto2writ: what do you think is fair?/

Gusto2writ: GA

DLHaeger:   Most NY agencies I know of charge 15%. That's pretty standard.

DRLIVES:    ?

DLHaeger:   It hurts to pay it, to be honest with you, but as I said before...

Rpanthr:    ?

DLHaeger:   the contacts they have, and the knowledge of what your book is
worth...

DLHaeger:   is in my opinion worth the investment.

Sushiwritr: Let's give Rp a first shot:   Rp GA

Rpanthr:    where can someone just starting find an honest agent

DLHaeger:   It can also cut your time in an editor's to-be-read pile, in half
or better.

DLHaeger:   Hmm. That is tough. My first one was not, so I understand the
concern...

DLHaeger:   I think the best thing to do, literally, is to ask around.

DLHaeger:   Listen in on these sorts of conversations, ask published authors
who their agents are...

Rpanthr:    and if you dont know who to ask?

DLHaeger:   Also, in The Writer's Market, they often list the clients
particular houses...

Typosarus:  ?

Rpanthr:    /

DLHaeger:   represent. I wouldn't imagine really successful authors would..

Sushiwritr: (I'm combing the Writer's Digest listings. )

DLHaeger:   stay with anyone other than a really reputable agent.

Sushiwritr: DR,   GA

DRLIVES:    Rpanthr asked my question.   Am I asking too many questions,
Paul? ;-]

DLHaeger:   Paul, that's what I did in the beginning, honestly.

DLHaeger:   And there's a risk involved.

DLHaeger:   But I also signed a short contract at first.

Sushiwritr: Good idea. Donna, yer doing great. Typo,   GA

Typosarus:  Given free rein (and a healthy advance) where would you begin to
write an original story?

Typosarus:  Character?  plot?  setting?

DLHaeger:   Wow! If I knew that!!!  LOL...

DLHaeger:   Well, Scotland and Britain are still huge sellers...

Typosarus:  So setting is the biggest consideration?

DLHaeger:   As to character, plot and setting, I wouldn't want to go giving
any million selling ideas...

DLHaeger:   away, just in case!

FalcnEdie:  LOL

DLHaeger:   I will say that suspense and mystery are supposedly really the...

DLHaeger:   "sure thing", as they say, if it's well written and compelling.

Sushiwritr: ? and GA to me:

Sushiwritr: You began "April" with a NT Bible quote.

Sushiwritr: I'd think that would make an east coast publisher leery.

DLHaeger:   LOL... Why is that?

Sushiwritr: Not being "pc" and all that . . .

DLHaeger:   Oh.

Sushiwritr: Heck, schools are about to celebrate "Special Persons Day" this
weekend.

DLHaeger:   Well, what can I say? Not HarperCollins, apparently! <g>

Sushiwritr: Amen to them, then.  ;-)

DLHaeger:   That's funny, Paul! Actually, I know what you mean. But in the...

DLHaeger:   case of  that particular novel, so much is tied up in religious
faith...

DLHaeger:   and, if you'll pardon the word, "sin" that it just seemed to fit.

Sushiwritr: Comes with the package, then.

DLHaeger:   I think so, yes.

Sushiwritr: I note many more Catholics than others, in the role.

DLHaeger:   I don't always use quotes.

Sushiwritr: I wonder why that is?

DLHaeger:   But sometimes they just seem to want to be there.

DLHaeger:   "In the role"?

Sushiwritr: Of a religious character.

Sushiwritr: Many Priests, few pastors.

Sushiwritr: (Ditto for TV)

DLHaeger:   Well, let's face it, Catholics are the only ones not allowed to
marry or be sexual beings.

Mstrebe:    (got to bail--great discussion. Thanks Ms. Haeger.)

DLHaeger:   That in itself creates the conflicts in many instances.

Sushiwritr: Makes for story tension, then?

DLHaeger:   Night Mstrebe! :)

Typosarus:  (It's the easily recognized collar)

Sushiwritr: LoL

DLHaeger:   It's probably the easiest form of it, yes.

DLHaeger:   And I think the collar is kind of another taboo past which we
don't tread...

DRLIVES:    ?

Sushiwritr: DR, GA

LdyElysium: topic?

DRLIVES:    When you first start out, do you know the end of the story?

DLHaeger:   It probably wouldn't have has much punch if the hero had been a
Presbyterian minister, able

DLHaeger:   to marry.

Sushiwritr: natch

DRLIVES:    How far do you get into a detailed plot line?

DLHaeger:   DR, not always, actually. That's a great question...

DLHaeger:   Because often there is a point for me when the characters take...

DLHaeger:   over their own story, if they're full enough that is, and
sometimes...

DLHaeger:   the end I envisioned for them is not the one they want. I don't
know...

DLHaeger:   how much sense that makes, but it does happen to a lot of authors.

DLHaeger:   DR, I'm pretty detailed, actually. But the finished product is
rarely close to what I began.

DLHaeger:   with.

DRLIVES:    oh good! that happens to me, too.

DLHaeger:   There are other authors I know who stay with it all the way, and
that works for them.

DLHaeger:   DR, I actually think it's the more common scenario, really.

DRLIVES:    thanks.

DLHaeger:   Because there's so much creativity involved, I don't think I'd
want to stick to a format...

DLHaeger:   that closely.

AnacondaOz: ?

Sushiwritr: Whoops! DR got bumped. Ana,  GA

DLHaeger:   Oh, dear. :(

AnacondaOz: Do you enjoy writing?

DLHaeger:   It'd be a pretty thankless job a lot of the time if I didn't!  LOL

Imaginit1:  ?

DLHaeger:   Seriously, I do enjoy making a story from nothing, creating
people, etc...

DLHaeger:   Once it's finished anyway. Earlier on, it can really torment an
author.

AnacondaOz: So, if writing is your career, is it a thankless job sometimes?

Sushiwritr: (Dr's back.)

DLHaeger:   It can feel like it at 4am, sure.

DLHaeger:   And if you write 1 book a year, there's 1 month of notoriety, and
11

AnacondaOz: Everything takes application.

DLHaeger:   months of discipline, research and a lot of solitude to pull it
off.

DLHaeger:   Absolutely!

Imaginit1:  What are the titles of some of the books that you have written?GA

DLHaeger:   And it can be difficult sometimes. Especially if you're at a
stage in the work...

DLHaeger:   where you feel it isn't working, or you just aren't getting it.

DLHaeger:   I have 4 novels published: Courtesan, The Return, Angel Bride...

DLHaeger:   Pieces of April. And on June 5th, Beyond The Glen will be
released.

DLHaeger:   Thanks for asking, by the way! :)

DLHaeger:   Paul, for you, that's a bit more Scottish burr coming in June! <g>

Sushiwritr: LoL

DLHaeger:   Hopefully it won't seem like *too* much!

AnacondaOz: :)

Sushiwritr: We have an anonymous question for you.

Sushiwritr: How shall I put it?

DLHaeger:   Hmm. Those can be dangerous! :)

Sushiwritr: Have you quit your day job?

DLHaeger:   LOL

DLHaeger:   Yes, actually, I've been fairly fortunate with my writing and it
has been my...

DLHaeger:   full time job since Courtesan was published.

Sushiwritr: Whoa!

DRLIVES:    great!

LdyElysium: wow!

Sushiwritr: ::turning green with envy:::

DLHaeger:   Well thanks. But that's why talking with folks like you is so
much fun...

DLHaeger:   because as I said earlier, even though I've done well with it,
it's a fairly...

Sushiwritr: Yup, the hour has already wheeled by, and it's late,

DLHaeger:   solitary profession most of the time.

Sushiwritr: for those who are stuck Back East.

Typosarus:  ?

Sushiwritr: Typo, GA, quick!

Typosarus:  Hundreds write few are published  What made the difference for
you?

DLHaeger:   That's easy. Having a story I felt absolutely driven to tell.

DLHaeger:   I was possessed by it for four years.

Imaginit1:  ?

Sushiwritr: I know the feeling.

DLHaeger:   Thankfully, I guess, it showed in the writing.

Typosarus:  Thanks

DLHaeger:   I'd love to hear about it sometime Paul!

Sushiwritr: Do you have time for Ima's ?

FalcnEdie:  hmmm   I've got just four years into mine now

DLHaeger:   And please feel free to e-mail me if anyone here didn't feel
comfortable...

DLHaeger:   asking questions out loud.

Sushiwritr: Ima, GA

FalcnEdie:  700 pages

DLHaeger:   I answer all of them. It takes me a while sometimes, but I do.

DLHaeger:   Ima's?

Imaginit1:  Which one(drove you)?

DLHaeger:   Hey, see Ben! That's a good sign! LOL

FalcnEdie:  LOL   that's what I was thinking   :-)

DLHaeger:   Imag, the only one not still in print, funny enough! Courtesan.

Sushiwritr: Imagine's will have to have the final Q, unless DLH can stay on.

DLHaeger:   S&S has kept all my others in print since then.

DRLIVES:    DL... you're welcome to join us anytime.  Enjoyed your insights.

Imaginit1:  ?

DLHaeger:   DR, well thank you! That's a great compliment! :)

DRLIVES:    mean it!

Imaginit1:  When was it published?

DLHaeger:   1993

DLHaeger:   Several folks on Bookaccino (my other haunt!) have gotten it in
used book stores.

Imaginit1:  Thanks

Sushiwritr: Well, the hour is up.

Sushiwritr: We're the last group of the day,

DLHaeger:   Thanks Paul and everyone for having me!

Sushiwritr: so don't feel you have to run away.

Sushiwritr: Anyone who's interested in our group, please email me.

Sushiwritr: Thanks much, Diane!

DRLIVES:    clap,clap,clap

FalcnEdie:  clapclapclapclapclap

AnacondaOz: Thanks, Diane.

DLHaeger:   My pleasure.

Imaginit1:  ditto

Sushiwritr: Will send out the Log shortly.

LdyElysium: ::clapclapclap::

Typosarus:  Much obliged  Diane.

AnacondaOz: I don't think I'll give up my day job unless I'm sufficiently
driven.

Sushiwritr: My wife made spaghetti tonite, so I'm being drawn away by
powerful forces . . .

DRLIVES:    Have to go...one of those tired easterners...see ya next week

DLHaeger:   LOL

DLHaeger:   Good night, Paul! <g>

FalcnEdie:  I'm off, too   thanks again Diane

AnacondaOz: night, Paul

AnacondaOz: Bye, Ben

Sushiwritr: Thanks everyone, and good night, all.

FalcnEdie:  it's midnight here

DRLIVES:    bye all

FalcnEdie:  bye Judy

FalcnEdie:  Bye paul

JewellLan:  bye, all!

FalcnEdie:  bye Donna